tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post1413030455195499015..comments2024-03-01T03:18:15.241-05:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Bouncer Post #25CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-78119180248795372192013-01-15T22:35:33.757-05:002013-01-15T22:35:33.757-05:00I find many useful things herewith. It is really a...I find many useful things herewith. It is really amazing for us. there are fully knowledge about <a href="www.celebritymobileteethwhitening.com/" rel="nofollow">Teeth Whitening services Florida</a>just click on the website and Take advantages . From a last decade I was searching such type of web site. . I refer this to my close friends who are already seeking for the same .thanks again guys…Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10291168098981562042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-35214282036256053962013-01-15T18:14:39.900-05:002013-01-15T18:14:39.900-05:00This sounds great! I would read on. I think your q...This sounds great! I would read on. I think your query needs to be tightened. You don't need to put in so many details to hook the agent.<br /><br />For example:<br />Growing up in Eldersby, Olivia has heard all of the local legends about the Wishing Tree, but has never believed them... that is until a freak accident befalls her arch-nemesis and the quarterback (her best friend's love interest) suddenly thinks she's a hot property.<br /><br />The wishes comes with a price, though. The bigger the wish, the steeper the price. But the wisher doesn't always end up paying.<br /><br />When Olivia's wish to land the lead in a school play ends in a student's death, she digs into the Wishing Tree's origins and is warned that wishing for love has the highest price of all.<br />Durango Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14854000354374970070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-4064422850011754522013-01-14T19:03:16.155-05:002013-01-14T19:03:16.155-05:00A cool premise! I like your opening page--very co...A cool premise! I like your opening page--very compelling.Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01731777158043597496noreply@blogger.com