tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post1632438233778823957..comments2024-03-29T05:20:50.447-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Bouncer Post #144CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-79745602051963505952013-02-13T23:02:15.165-05:002013-02-13T23:02:15.165-05:00I'm already sympathizing with this girl :)
Gr...I'm already sympathizing with this girl :) <br />Great job on last paragraph on giving the comparisons and I love how you worded it. <br />#141Debbie Emoryhttp://www.debbieemory.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-3585916352509413682013-02-11T22:48:08.350-05:002013-02-11T22:48:08.350-05:00The title alone drew me in! Your query was great t...The title alone drew me in! Your query was great too, but I got hung up on one line: An invader of privacy... Not sure if that's relavent to the query. But I like that you added him being an exceptional kisser!<br />I also enjoyed this line from your first 250: The god holding the mirror definitely scowled at me, as if he were more than chiseled stone and could hear my lie.<br /><br />-Good luck from Entry #152Shannonhttp://www.shannonwixom.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-8533119711645547472013-02-11T18:47:33.569-05:002013-02-11T18:47:33.569-05:00You already has my attention COMPLETELY from the k...You already has my attention COMPLETELY from the kissing scene competition! Your pitch is great-- easy to read and the major plot points all feel touched upon (I'm jealous!). Love your first 250! I would read this book in a heartbeat. #140Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-10762583993873424822013-02-11T14:39:34.958-05:002013-02-11T14:39:34.958-05:00I loved your hilarious kissing scene, and I love t...I loved your hilarious kissing scene, and I love this! Nicely done! #146Carissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10594436685900756259noreply@blogger.com