tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post1979454952647229912..comments2024-03-20T07:22:57.464-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Bouncer Round 6 #37CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-10177528286466564022013-02-19T08:59:06.595-05:002013-02-19T08:59:06.595-05:00I have to agree with Carissa--this is such a great...I have to agree with Carissa--this is such a great voice! So strong we can almost picture her in front of us saying it. Great job!<br /><br />Tracy --#10Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01731777158043597496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-47789620624669381522013-02-18T18:42:05.717-05:002013-02-18T18:42:05.717-05:00I love this first 250. They're so perfect beca...I love this first 250. They're so perfect because we get a great feel for Sara and her voice but also get some action right away!<br /><br />In the query I didn't get an entirely clear picture of the plot/stakes. Sera gets to choose the outcome of the war ... but how? Will she declare it, or fight for it, or? Which side is Lord Caden on? What does Sera have to gain/lose either way she chooses? Is the war-outcome decision tied up in her decision re: the boys or is it separate from it? What are the riddles and dimensions that are referred to? <br /><br />That said though, ultimately this was a really catchy query and first 250. I'd totally read on!<br /><br />Carissa -- #24Carissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10594436685900756259noreply@blogger.com