tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post3126092846189481887..comments2024-03-29T05:20:50.447-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Kissing Scene #5CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-21856880591638110282013-02-13T22:42:20.037-05:002013-02-13T22:42:20.037-05:00Holy smokes! Hot! Great descriptions and dialogue!...Holy smokes! Hot! Great descriptions and dialogue! LOVE! :DCUPIDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-43397314360492417662013-02-13T14:51:50.151-05:002013-02-13T14:51:50.151-05:00You are terrific at describing the physical part. ...You are terrific at describing the physical part. What a great job! And as the others said, very hot!Suzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16502606950280751205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-58583930106974482682013-02-12T21:51:21.119-05:002013-02-12T21:51:21.119-05:00This one is hot and I loved the writing in this. G...This one is hot and I loved the writing in this. Great job!Brenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-49032675788465920152013-02-12T20:32:23.555-05:002013-02-12T20:32:23.555-05:00Okay, this scene is hot.
HOT.
And the writing ...Okay, this scene is hot. <br /><br />HOT. <br /><br />And the writing is really beautiful. This line, in particular, "Curious fingers tread carefully over tender ribs." made me want to drag a highlighter over my computer screen. (Which is not very effective, as the screen is not made of pages belonging to my favorite, worn copy of a book.)<br /><br />Seriously. That line cut me like sharp poetry. <br /><br />LOVE it. KelsNotChelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08589509934771708353noreply@blogger.com