tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post3263107030058159513..comments2024-03-29T05:20:50.447-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Bouncer Post #59CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-7801977282703518822012-02-14T03:07:42.670-05:002012-02-14T03:07:42.670-05:00This is very suspenseful. I was instantly drawn in...This is very suspenseful. I was instantly drawn in. Best of luck!Empty Nest Insiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10074223969046687064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-58341670942832774932012-02-13T13:35:47.811-05:002012-02-13T13:35:47.811-05:00Very strong query and love the premise of this.
Co...Very strong query and love the premise of this.<br />Congrats on getting in. Good luck!Carmenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01502915116446772081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-73850196526290578142012-02-13T10:00:53.639-05:002012-02-13T10:00:53.639-05:00I love the query, but not so much the 250. It does...I love the query, but not so much the 250. It doesn't feel like your ms is starting at the right place. The best place to start would probably be his fiancé's funeral. But I like the premise enough, so you're in. But, if you do get a request from agents, remember to revise before sending it.Bouncer Bookish Handygirlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-52327020287315287772012-02-12T23:22:54.721-05:002012-02-12T23:22:54.721-05:00This is very intriguing, I'd definitely read i...This is very intriguing, I'd definitely read it.<br />Good luck.Suzihttp://literaryengineer.areavoices.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-65728358853027256222012-02-12T22:26:20.371-05:002012-02-12T22:26:20.371-05:00I like your query and your pages - sounds like you...I like your query and your pages - sounds like you've set up a great conflict! Good luck.Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09745302400759911758noreply@blogger.com