tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post3575077321053130330..comments2024-03-29T05:20:50.447-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Bouncer Post #37CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-18999496297661850872012-02-07T22:56:33.037-05:002012-02-07T22:56:33.037-05:00Thank you Ilana!!Thank you Ilana!!Alexandra Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-2691738047489311392012-02-07T19:47:11.914-05:002012-02-07T19:47:11.914-05:00A female king? Glass-making wizard? Sounds like so...A female king? Glass-making wizard? Sounds like some original characters there--in addition to a mermaid! Definitely intriguing. Good luck w/your entry!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-47361817362126021932012-02-07T16:05:22.083-05:002012-02-07T16:05:22.083-05:00Thanks very much! If you leave your entry #s I'...Thanks very much! If you leave your entry #s I'll be sure to check them out :)Alexandra Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-36816108162406687432012-02-07T15:22:42.041-05:002012-02-07T15:22:42.041-05:00This sounds adorable. I love your imaagery!This sounds adorable. I love your imaagery!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-10135774558600040612012-02-06T22:41:20.586-05:002012-02-06T22:41:20.586-05:00Thank you!! :) And thanks for your honest criticis...Thank you!! :) And thanks for your honest criticism; I'll think about how to revise.Alexandra Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-54944741653014225142012-02-06T22:03:57.942-05:002012-02-06T22:03:57.942-05:00I love the line about the Leviathan hidden under h...I love the line about the Leviathan hidden under her dad's kitchen. The premise is fantastic, but I have to agree with Iheartbooks about the first page.Lori M. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858438789496971734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-49160532230089246562012-02-06T18:46:29.637-05:002012-02-06T18:46:29.637-05:00Your premise intrigued me. I have to be honest th...Your premise intrigued me. I have to be honest that the first 250 didn't suck me in as I'd hoped (more telling than showing?), but I'd want to see where the story goes. So...you're in!Bouncer Iheartbooksnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-11794575793934967122012-02-06T15:10:40.522-05:002012-02-06T15:10:40.522-05:00This sounds absolutely fun. Best of luck to your e...This sounds absolutely fun. Best of luck to your entry!David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-63042195549530979102012-02-06T14:41:03.384-05:002012-02-06T14:41:03.384-05:00Thanks Megan! I've revised the query so many t...Thanks Megan! I've revised the query so many times... I'm glad you liked it!Alexandra Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-22083008344609349902012-02-06T14:04:50.446-05:002012-02-06T14:04:50.446-05:00This sounds really fun! The second sentence of yo...This sounds really fun! The second sentence of your query made me laugh out loud. Good luck!Megan Dolanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07672065144005028628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-66277829514797397832012-02-06T13:07:01.981-05:002012-02-06T13:07:01.981-05:00Thank you!Thank you!Alexandranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-59970235649914793442012-02-06T12:40:29.684-05:002012-02-06T12:40:29.684-05:00This story sounds like a fun read!This story sounds like a fun read!Kay Blisshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06187980209587770636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-9524626426980693862012-02-06T11:16:09.566-05:002012-02-06T11:16:09.566-05:00There just aren't enough mermaid stories out t...There just aren't enough mermaid stories out there. And a leviathan to top it all off! This seems super fun - love the first 250. Well done!JennaDaniellenoreply@blogger.com