tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post3877731786533042661..comments2024-03-20T07:22:57.464-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Love Triangle Entry #1CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-4821035972078452572012-01-26T21:48:34.354-05:002012-01-26T21:48:34.354-05:00There is definitely a huge feeling of excitement g...There is definitely a huge feeling of excitement going on in this. It really drew me in. What is out in that field???Shell Flowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08127004188099765270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-37048943825248144222012-01-26T14:25:30.335-05:002012-01-26T14:25:30.335-05:00Thanks Cupid :) Great contest! Thanks so much fo...Thanks Cupid :) Great contest! Thanks so much for doing this!Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-87355600584692651892012-01-26T12:51:10.812-05:002012-01-26T12:51:10.812-05:00This one has great intrigue! And I love protectors...This one has great intrigue! And I love protectors. I know I'd love to read this story. Good job!CUPIDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-84771365282936317222012-01-25T13:19:36.302-05:002012-01-25T13:19:36.302-05:00Very nice :) Can't wait to read your chapters ...Very nice :) Can't wait to read your chapters today!Stephanie Diazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10606180983300679986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-77680990360793862722012-01-25T13:03:02.616-05:002012-01-25T13:03:02.616-05:00Great opening!Great opening!ilimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17899071063752311737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-89111349910320294742012-01-24T23:36:00.773-05:002012-01-24T23:36:00.773-05:00This one gives me goosebumps! I've seen it a f...This one gives me goosebumps! I've seen it a few times now, and get the shivers every time :)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121018905141253640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-58368028137908048292012-01-24T21:28:45.107-05:002012-01-24T21:28:45.107-05:00I don't think it's exact but it seems to h...I don't think it's exact but it seems to have the overall "feel" of the movie. If that's makes sense. LOL :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03335427276116292574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-20222372664995572382012-01-24T19:33:16.818-05:002012-01-24T19:33:16.818-05:00I'll have to work on my query and figure out h...I'll have to work on my query and figure out how to further clarify that :)Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-20088017142445687512012-01-24T19:31:33.931-05:002012-01-24T19:31:33.931-05:00Thanks Jenny!Thanks Jenny!Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-62996060712269737372012-01-24T19:31:10.833-05:002012-01-24T19:31:10.833-05:00All due to your help :)All due to your help :)Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-48575469352462720892012-01-24T19:30:47.680-05:002012-01-24T19:30:47.680-05:00It's because you're an awesome CP!It's because you're an awesome CP!Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-6440989426392030222012-01-24T19:30:23.432-05:002012-01-24T19:30:23.432-05:00I haven't seen that yet, now I need to so I ca...I haven't seen that yet, now I need to so I can find out how similar the two are :)Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-12401675950952350022012-01-24T19:29:52.956-05:002012-01-24T19:29:52.956-05:00Thanks so much! A good comparison too ;)Thanks so much! A good comparison too ;)Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-25310863901648210792012-01-24T19:21:21.151-05:002012-01-24T19:21:21.151-05:00This is good. I like the voice of it. I'd be i...This is good. I like the voice of it. I'd be interested in reading more.<br /><br />The only question I have is: In the query you mention the protectors save Eri from the beasts-- but she has to learn to be a protector to save herself and everyone else. Why? Why aren't the protectors guarding herself and the villigers?<br /><br />You skip over that in the query.<br /><br />That might be the focus of the one of the story plots, but not even mentioning it in the query seems like an omission.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12528824662552817841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-13160640987475781972012-01-24T16:56:35.571-05:002012-01-24T16:56:35.571-05:00Great job! I've read this opening several time...Great job! I've read this opening several times and I still get chills.Jenny S. Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482342313938669366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-47823027185716366352012-01-24T14:39:57.343-05:002012-01-24T14:39:57.343-05:00Such an awesome opening. And what a great query!! ...Such an awesome opening. And what a great query!! :)Kelley Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06373650788799372118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-32103400741159670012012-01-24T14:29:06.742-05:002012-01-24T14:29:06.742-05:00Opening = chills. Seriously, I still read this an...Opening = chills. Seriously, I still read this and go... holy crap! What is going on??? Ack!<br /><br />Yes, I really sound like that :)Cassie Maehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17706774393186819619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-54076063742326991452012-01-24T12:46:40.454-05:002012-01-24T12:46:40.454-05:00I love the opening to your query. Makes me excited...I love the opening to your query. Makes me excited to read more. It reminds me a little of the movie Red Riding Hood which is awesome. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03335427276116292574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-85811355644596030072012-01-24T09:04:51.850-05:002012-01-24T09:04:51.850-05:000_0 Um. Can I read this? Please? It sounds like FO...0_0 Um. Can I read this? Please? It sounds like FOREST OF HANDS AND TEETH meets BEASTMASTER. <br /><br />GOOD LUCK!!!Leigh Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15827971896088856057noreply@blogger.com