tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post7280204531985265990..comments2024-03-20T07:22:57.464-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Bouncer Post #148CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-81015882773424931472013-02-13T23:09:57.912-05:002013-02-13T23:09:57.912-05:00"...before a phoenix can rise there has to be..."...before a phoenix can rise there has to be a fire." This gives me chills.<br />"The Mis(s)fit Club: Lost Soles struts down the catwalk"—love it.<br />#141 Debbie Emoryhttp://debbieemory.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-60212320740438836862013-02-13T10:54:41.038-05:002013-02-13T10:54:41.038-05:00Love the first line and first paragraph. There'...Love the first line and first paragraph. There's a lot of info in the next two. A trick I've learned is to look at the first 30 pages and use what's there to create the query. First 250 were really intriguing. Very curious why it's being closed up.<br /><br />#156Mandie Baxterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01178057465311925795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-65735350099388744532013-02-11T22:44:27.966-05:002013-02-11T22:44:27.966-05:00Love the first line of the query! I will say that ...Love the first line of the query! I will say that the query seems to pack so much in that by the end I was a little lost. But I love the idea of secrets and memories locked up in closets, and your first 250 make me want know why the workmen are drywalling it up!Carissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10594436685900756259noreply@blogger.com