tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post8237136893830860103..comments2024-03-20T07:22:57.464-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Bouncer Post #126CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-43851133441500840902013-02-04T18:18:58.053-05:002013-02-04T18:18:58.053-05:00This query just grabs you. I don't think it...This query just grabs you. I don't think it's necessary to have her skill in the query because now I just want to read the whole thing to find out more and have my questions answered!<br /><br />You only need the first 250 and query to tell that this author has something special. Good luck!!! Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-13138630728253780112013-02-04T17:14:12.373-05:002013-02-04T17:14:12.373-05:00The idea of a modern Noah's Ark experiment is ...The idea of a modern Noah's Ark experiment is a really intriguing premise. The chaos of the earthquake grabbed my attention right away in your first 250 words. I would definitely keep reading beyond this point. :)Erin L. Funkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00068394727011130144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-3556769611680509612013-02-04T16:49:19.779-05:002013-02-04T16:49:19.779-05:00I want to read this book. Basically, your query di...I want to read this book. Basically, your query did its job times a thousand! The only nitpick I have is that I would explicitly say in the query what skill it is that she is supposed to have but doesn't.<br /><br />Other than that, this is great. I really hope you get in! And I can't wait to see your book on bookshelves one day, so I can read it :)Alexa D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12597238050641221884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-80800839482010211762013-02-04T15:04:17.008-05:002013-02-04T15:04:17.008-05:00What skill do they think she has that she doesn...What skill do they think she has that she doesn't have? It might make sense to start the first pages as she's kidnapped. Just a thought. Good luck. I'm entry #111.Kathleeahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06087009456072956020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-50471234865175811972013-02-04T14:33:35.999-05:002013-02-04T14:33:35.999-05:00Great query and first 250. I'd love to contin...Great query and first 250. I'd love to continue reading. Good luck!<br />#112Laura Rueckerthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12267281174937559086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-16865047582290226542013-02-04T10:23:12.519-05:002013-02-04T10:23:12.519-05:00Looking good! I love your query and opening, not t...Looking good! I love your query and opening, not to mention the whole thing! Good luck! Colene Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-48230239222100573812013-02-04T10:19:43.285-05:002013-02-04T10:19:43.285-05:00Chills! Love the idea of the modern day Noah's...Chills! Love the idea of the modern day Noah's Ark. Your query really pulled me in and I want to know what happens! Good luck, Jennie!Abby Minardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963640263845561309noreply@blogger.com