tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post8771345691856788540..comments2024-03-29T05:20:50.447-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Bouncer Post #141CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-47944342317814591102013-02-18T09:43:49.944-05:002013-02-18T09:43:49.944-05:00Thank you everyone!Thank you everyone!Debbie Emoryhttp://www.debbieemory.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-23357588198887265712013-02-15T12:04:42.722-05:002013-02-15T12:04:42.722-05:00Congratulations!Congratulations!Tiffanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08353016444018036871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-67472500214380764782013-02-15T11:18:46.005-05:002013-02-15T11:18:46.005-05:00I write MG and YA and thought this sounded good. I...I write MG and YA and thought this sounded good. I'm not sure MG would identify with Shakespeare though. Also maybe use a raven instead of a crow. I agree you need to have something different than a worm to save. Intrigued! #174Kathleeahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06087009456072956020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-41918602391444080032013-02-14T22:46:08.892-05:002013-02-14T22:46:08.892-05:00Best Valentine's Day gift ever! Thanks everyon...Best Valentine's Day gift ever! Thanks everyone!Debbie Emoryhttp://www.debbieemory.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-88454208135734372602013-02-14T12:52:56.358-05:002013-02-14T12:52:56.358-05:00You had me at boggart obsessed with William Shakes...You had me at boggart obsessed with William Shakespeare.<br /><br />You're in!Bouncer Zeldahttp://cupidslitconnection.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-77085556254551492302013-02-14T10:35:58.725-05:002013-02-14T10:35:58.725-05:00I love the concept. Really liked the 250 words as...I love the concept. Really liked the 250 words aswell. I am no query expert (I have never written one before this competition so please bear that in mind) but I htought yours was great! It was clear and concise but didn't give away too much.<br /><br />Good Luck<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-33298958524564535362013-02-14T08:47:06.440-05:002013-02-14T08:47:06.440-05:00I love the idea of a boggart with magical add and ...I love the idea of a boggart with magical add and an obsession with Shakespeare. That lends a lot of possibility to your work.<br /><br />Good Luck<br /><br />#137Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-42331626053991014192013-02-13T22:39:46.453-05:002013-02-13T22:39:46.453-05:00Thank you ladies for the advice and encouragement!...Thank you ladies for the advice and encouragement! Debbie Emoryhttp://www.debbieemory.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-87670743055812410712013-02-12T16:05:28.798-05:002013-02-12T16:05:28.798-05:00I also like this premise, though I don't read ...I also like this premise, though I don't read MG. My kids do, and I know my son would love this. I have a suggestion to enhance your query regarding the line that says: That’s more than saving a worm. I think you should replace the worm w/ something more impactful. A worm is too easy to save, and you want to compare saving the forest (a huge thing) w/ something else that is big (i.e. hard to save).<br /><br />I really liked your first 250, especially little details like the slightly chewed pencil (so true of kids).<br /><br />-Good luck from Entry #152.Shannonhttp://www.shannonwixom.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-72862928364017346282013-02-11T22:34:52.872-05:002013-02-11T22:34:52.872-05:00Boggart often mistaken for a baby dragon? I'm ...Boggart often mistaken for a baby dragon? I'm in love with this already! #146<br />Carissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10594436685900756259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-17495194182924457062013-02-11T09:16:32.810-05:002013-02-11T09:16:32.810-05:00Enjoyed the story and thought the query was an att...Enjoyed the story and thought the query was an attention grabber. Josh seems a thoughtful boy. I liked him immediatly. <br />~Just Jill<br />#139Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14264782489713599426noreply@blogger.com