tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post3301150352727554734..comments2024-03-20T07:22:57.464-04:00Comments on Cupid's Literary Connection: Love Triangle Entry #10CUPIDhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-66689142660290722412012-01-26T12:59:23.800-05:002012-01-26T12:59:23.800-05:00Very fun! And I can already feel the great romance...Very fun! And I can already feel the great romance this could have. Great!!!!CUPIDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01726782711068858241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-1895121412734694542012-01-25T18:03:58.136-05:002012-01-25T18:03:58.136-05:00A greta opening line is the desire of all writers....A greta opening line is the desire of all writers. You've done great with yours.Angela Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03324366495151363782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-79016048440832425732012-01-25T08:41:47.037-05:002012-01-25T08:41:47.037-05:00I agree with Stina. I don't normally go browsi...I agree with Stina. I don't normally go browsing through Contemporary Romance, but I like the sound of this one (I'm a sucker for girls who fall for their best guy friend) and NOW I want to know what happens!Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726858055689145824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-65645399201285431262012-01-25T08:37:05.156-05:002012-01-25T08:37:05.156-05:00This sounds like my kinds of story. :DThis sounds like my kinds of story. :DStinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-35479391270616979272012-01-25T06:37:33.739-05:002012-01-25T06:37:33.739-05:00Fantastic opening line! Between that and the query...Fantastic opening line! Between that and the query, I'd read more. Good luck :)MarcyKatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08303670174583471227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-91404051517268537172012-01-24T18:04:50.439-05:002012-01-24T18:04:50.439-05:00I agree with Cassie. Not much else to add. Great j...I agree with Cassie. Not much else to add. Great job!Kelley Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06373650788799372118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-36691190369421147562012-01-24T15:06:04.472-05:002012-01-24T15:06:04.472-05:00This is seriously amazing, I wish I knew some more...This is seriously amazing, I wish I knew some more baseball players :P And that query was honestly perfect!!!!!hersheygirl68https://www.blogger.com/profile/13428009200216071447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-82667754410988093702012-01-24T14:41:11.949-05:002012-01-24T14:41:11.949-05:00How can I add to the awesomeness that's alread...How can I add to the awesomeness that's already been said? This sounds great!Cassie Maehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17706774393186819619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-84379422526556326302012-01-24T14:36:49.133-05:002012-01-24T14:36:49.133-05:00Wonderful query! Her voice jumps out as well as i...Wonderful query! Her voice jumps out as well as in the beginning, nicely done! Good luck :)Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-1560166718532291052012-01-24T13:56:16.361-05:002012-01-24T13:56:16.361-05:00Great opening line!Great opening line!Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03843006118151762550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-10427999076805046292012-01-24T11:48:49.039-05:002012-01-24T11:48:49.039-05:00I was lucky to read this and, oh my holy wow, it&#...I was lucky to read this and, oh my holy wow, it's such a wonderful story. Kelsey is real, believable and NOT a doormat. And David? *fans self* That's just a delicious bit of awesome right there.Tristinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16555268553894040716noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-35879845809610340132012-01-24T11:03:32.110-05:002012-01-24T11:03:32.110-05:00The voice is SO good! I love Kelsey already. And t...The voice is SO good! I love Kelsey already. And the query just makes me want to know what happens--awesome!Maggie Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17378337707268580252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-17888776110804886162012-01-24T09:16:01.011-05:002012-01-24T09:16:01.011-05:00This query is smooth as butter on toast. It sprea...This query is smooth as butter on toast. It spreads through my senses and makes me want to take a bite! I would love to read this. Pretty please, with cinnamon and sugar on top?AngelaCatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11733897520026606241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-48070131537049432232012-01-24T09:04:10.251-05:002012-01-24T09:04:10.251-05:00I was lucky enough to read this manuscript last we...I was lucky enough to read this manuscript last week and even though romance isn't normally my strong suit, I *loved* this story. Even in this first 250, Kelsey sounds like an awesome character - and Miranda is a perfect annoying younger sis :D The dynamic between both is amazing!Mariekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16383960692054256957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-29079548448594320332012-01-24T08:54:28.691-05:002012-01-24T08:54:28.691-05:00I LOVE this opening. And seriously - best first li...I LOVE this opening. And seriously - best first line ever! I like how you really get a sense of Kelsey's personality in such a short excerpt!Jamie Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07504892632149036762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3349220550249399644.post-64819381669057113452012-01-24T08:44:44.921-05:002012-01-24T08:44:44.921-05:00Lucky critique partner here to testify: LAST YEAR&...Lucky critique partner here to testify: LAST YEAR'S MISTAKE is the sweetest, smartest YA Contemp I've ever read. GO LYM GO!!!Leigh Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15827971896088856057noreply@blogger.com