Title: THE SNOW LION
Genre: MG Sci-Fi
Word Count: 62,000
Query:
Twelve-year-old Lena Landalian's parents
have left her behind in the City. Before she left, Lena’s mother told her a
dangerous secret—they are both Zendabardis, a clan supposedly wiped out centuries
before. Lena begins to piece together the truth of her ancestral powers when
she finds her uncle repairing a little jeweled snow lion. It suddenly flies up
into the air, a living creature made from inanimate materials. Her uncle calls
it a fairy fate.
Just as Lena begins adjusting to school,
her familiar world is upended by a ferocious invasion from beyond the
mountains. The invaders execute the royal family and systematically bomb the
City. In the chaos, Lena helps rescue a motley group of survivors, including a
boy who may be the last living heir to the throne and an old man who should
have been king.
Pursued by the invaders through the
ancient catacombs beneath the city, these survivors must learn to trust each
other and become a team, especially hard for the arrogant young prince, Tarin,
and the loner, Lena. But as they first flee and then begin to fight back, Lena
and Tarin unravel secrets about themselves—and the truth about the world beyond
the mountains—that the ruling dynasty has suppressed for centuries.
At last Lena learns how to tap her
hidden Zendabardi power to bring to bring fairy fates back to life, and that
just might save them all.
THE SNOW LION, which draws on Tibetan
culture and myth, is akin to far-future novels such as City of Ember
and might appeal to readers of Sarah Prineas, Laura Amy Schlitz and Rae Carson.
First 250:
Lena leaned
out over Florinal’s bow, her hair flying, straining for the first
glimpse of the City. She and her parents had left behind vast fields of wheat,
rice paddies and endless citrus groves, where Grid-deaf Bhodi toiled with bent
backs. They had passed the City's outer islands, dotted with villages and
crowned with snow. Now at last, Florinal tacked across the mouth of the
wide bay that led into the heart of the City, closer with every puff of wind.
Houses and gardens, temples and shops
gripped the rocky mountainsides, a brilliant tapestry in the late afternoon
sunlight. Even at this distance she heard bells ringing and the rumble of
wheels on the stone roads. Voices drifted across the water. On a dock, Grid
workers unloaded bales of crimson silk from a barge and floated them
effortlessly onto the back of a truck. Lena inhaled spice and smoke and the
rich, musky scent of human and animal life.
Lena looked back at her parents. They were watching a black boat speeding toward them, slapping every wave, their faces expressionless. Lena studied the oncoming boat. Three men in orange tunics and black pants stood on the deck—King’s guards. It wasn’t a big secret that her parents hated the City guards. Lena did, too. Everyone did.
Lena looked back at her parents. They were watching a black boat speeding toward them, slapping every wave, their faces expressionless. Lena studied the oncoming boat. Three men in orange tunics and black pants stood on the deck—King’s guards. It wasn’t a big secret that her parents hated the City guards. Lena did, too. Everyone did.
When she glanced at them again, her
parents seemed to be chatting casually as if they hadn’t even noticed the boat
and the guards. It cut across their path, throwing up a sharp wave.
I think Bree Ogden might like to see this when the exclusives are up. Please send the first 50 pages as an attachment to Bree@D4eo.com with the subject line #CLCBSD. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteJami Nord
Intern for Bree Ogden
www.d4eoliteraryagency.com
www.agentbree.wordpress.com
Thank you. Will do,
ReplyDelete