Title:
LOST AMONG THE STARS
Genre: YA Sci-Fi
Word Count: 82k
Query:
Ten long years after her father
disappears, sixteen-year-old Jayne Orcutt realizes his human-like alien
conspiracy theories are true when a spaceship lands in her backyard.
Taken hostage and whisked across
space, Jayne butts heads with an enigmatic alien rebel. He
is convinced her father’s journal contains epic truths about the origin of
life that will assist him in conquering every habited planet in the galaxy,
Earth included.
So he demands Jayne decode the
journal or die. Only Jayne can't make heads or tails of her father's
hieroglyphic scribbles, and she can’t ask her father about them—he has disappeared
(again) from the rebel’s clutches.
Jayne’s salvation comes not from
Earth, but from Orin, the dashing young Protector begrudgingly sent to her
rescue. He pledges to keep Jayne alive—at least long enough to ensure the
power-hungry rebel doesn’t obtain her father’s journal.
Deciphering her father’s secrets
could result in the destruction of life, aliens and earthlings alike, but it
also might be Jayne’s only chance to find where he is among the stars. Jayne
and Orin must find a way to work together, without killing each other, to
ensure her father’s secrets don’t fall into the wrong hands, or Jayne just
might lose her father forever.
LOST AMONG THE STARS is an
82,000-word young adult science fiction adventure. Jayne and Orin’s differing
perspectives are reminiscent of Beth Revis’ ACROSS THE UNIVERSE, while their
quest to discover secrets of the past evokes INDIANA JONES & THE LAST
CRUSADE.
First 250:
The spaceship was going to land
right in her backyard. Jayne threw herself against the window in her father’s
study, as if her face pushed to the glass would somehow give shape to the blue
light blasting through the blackness of the night. Was it?
No. Not a spaceship. Just because
her father believed in aliens didn’t mean UFOs were real. Get a freaking
grip, already.
She pulled away, ready to sigh,
when the windowpane shuddered
and sent a shock wave up both hands still splayed against the glass. She
stumbled back and yanked closed the heavy drape as if it could somehow stop the
intrusion. The blue intensified, casting an eerie halo about the drapery.
Then darkness.
Seconds passed, maybe minutes,
maybe years. Jayne’s heart thumped rapidly like a drummer on speed. She tiptoed
to the window and pulled back the drape. The desk lamp from behind cast a soft
glow upon the glass, outlining the mound of strawberry blonde curls that
spilled about her pale, freckled face. She scanned the moonless night. The
lights in the sky were gone.
Lights in the sky fly by. She repeated the mantra ten times, letting each familiar word
comfort every frazzled nerve. She reminded herself there was no unidentified
flying object in her neighborhood, only a low-lying plane headed towards the
private airstrip miles away.
At that very moment, Jayne
resolved to stop drinking coffee late at night. Her nerves needed caffeine like
a diabetic needed processed sugar.
I'm so surprised this wasn't snapped up... Amidst so many dark entries this one really popped to me as being v fresh and different. I definitely see there being a place in the market for a modern day space opera.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to see the first three chapters please! Send via email attachment to alison@therightsfactory.com as a Word file. Thanks! :)
ReplyDeleteGrateful for shariing this
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