BREAKING TRADITION
YA Romance
He stares up at me. I wonder if he really wants to think of me
for the last—I check the TV countdown—55 seconds of 2012. We’ve been sitting
like this for the last hour, me slumped on the couch, his head on my hip, him
cuddling my arm against his chest. My other arm rests along his side, slick
with his heat. This closeness isn’t how our relationship usually is, and I’m
afraid if I move, the spell will break.
“So,
are we gonna toast each other?” he asks.
“Is
there another tradition you know?” I mean it innocently, sarcastically, but
then I realize there is another tradition, one for a boy and a girl. I swear
his gaze drops to my lips for a moment. Keep yourself together. “Well?” I ask.
His
lips quirk. I love his lips, both so full, the upper slightly pointed where it
meets the bottom. I shouldn’t think about his lips, but they’re a giant stop
sign in my mind, sending my thoughts to a screeching halt.
He
motions me down. His hot breath tickles my neck. “There’s the kissing one.”
My
stomach flips. I force my muscles to relax. When I turn to look at him, we’re
maybe a centimeter apart. If we weren’t at an angle, our noses would touch.
“FIFTEEN!”
The countdown. Also how old we are.
“TEN!”
How many years we’ve known each other.
“FIVE!”
How long I’ve liked him.
Maybe
what he says is a joke, maybe he’s just going to laugh about it with his
friends, maybe he’ll pull back at the last minute and say gross, maybe he just
wants a kiss, maybe maybe maybe, but I don’t have time for maybes, and I don’t
want to miss this, so I nod right as the TV yells, “ONE!”
Before
I know what’s happened, he lifts his head and there’s a feathery pressure
sideways on my lips, and then it’s gone, and all I know is I want more.
His
eyelashes flutter before he winks at me. “Cheers.”
The sneak! Love the idea of friends forever falling in love. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI love this. And the countdown. You really get her feelings.
ReplyDeleteAaaawww...the best friends in love angle absolutely NEVER gets old. Great job, I can really feel her emotion in this!
ReplyDeleteI already mentioned all of my FEELS about this scene on your blog. But I still think it's fabulous. :D Kudos again!
ReplyDeleteThis is so cute and I love the When Harry Met Sally type of stories. Great job!
ReplyDeleteSuch a happy flippity-flop going on in my heart right now. Love this!
ReplyDeleteOh she knew she was setting that up! LOL Totally something I would do. :)
ReplyDeleteLOOOVE the countdown.
This is just great stuff! :D